Wednesday, November 12, 2008

All that I have said.....or haven't...


I loiter in the dimly lit alleys of my heart,
loved a nascent feeling..
As the naked emotions dance round me...
I retreat to a corner.

The dark corner where I came from...
when silence drowns everything..
darkness shields all...
I would like to repay my dues.

But who is going to ask for it???

Beatified by resentment...
my eternal search for complexity
I regulate my existence
as impatience binds me in a cage...

I await for a miracle...
holding my breath..teeth clenched...
And I pay the price...
And I know I have to do so

I will keep on repaying as nothing's fair...

9 comments:

Saptarshi Bhattacharya said...

Good as usual.....

but like a typical metropolitan poet we are too much engrossed in ourselves.....

I regret it..... you must also....

Krishanu said...

There is nothing greater than I...the world stars from me...ends here too...

rimz said...

hmmmm...nothing to say.
I think nothin to regret in being selfish.Its our life n we r concerned about ourselves only,none/nothing else. dats true life.
we r no grrt altruists to sacrifice our own happinesses.

rimz said...

try some jolly stuffz now dude.!!
r mon kharap korte valo lgche na.
efface d ephemeral cul-de-sac... :)

Krishanu said...

My effacing is a bit different!!!
When I hit the ephemeral cul-de-sac I
just run the bulldozer straight into the dead end....Pandemonium..

And I find the highway again...!!!!

Deb_SG said...

nice writing..........

but try writing something on the brighter side of life forgetting about "I".
try something on "we".

rimz said...

i like dat line most "beatified by resentment."....
u use dis line at many a places dese days...its nice..

Krishanu said...

sorry dsg I can't forget about 'I'..that would be like renouncing the world .....

living outside dying inside said...

hmmm let urself destine ur own fate,b driven by ur positive instincts.