Monday, April 20, 2009

Afreen


"I wish quivering lips go easy, the intoxication is bewitching..
One bewitched veil, slowly tells us of the break of dawn with a smiling face"

Oh..

How the dimples flank her....
My eyes watch in awe the sights...
My fight..My first flight...
Eyes are dreams..passion in existence...
And the sky converge in those eyes...


Mon amour...
speak of love,speak slow
speak of love,speak low.....

In this scheming crowd wish your hand is always in mine
And lost in the obscurity of your lips...

Oh...

I listen to the silent eloqunce of the kiss...
The kiss...
Brushed past a decade..an age..
Of the melting snow..
Or the rising sun
From the tranquil wave of emotions...


I am tearing myself apart again...


Mon amour...
speak of love,speak slow
speak of love,speak low....


In this feared necropolis...
The greyish emotions..
Pitch black lies....
white fangs...


A little lost soul...
seeking solace...empathy...
never craved for crimson petals...
or the white rose...
velvet cedars...


When I am walking the luminated dungeon...
I'm following your afterglow...


My name is love..
I'm Eros..

11 comments:

anindyo said...

beautiful writing.... keep it up :)

Krishanu said...

(modest smile)

urchin_fly said...

excellent composition man....nicely crafted...nd simple...i like...

rimz said...

awesome. liked it very much. one of ur best creations so far (according to me)... trying to feel the eros...
just too nice.
give more such nice pieces forgettin the dungeons n mundane lives often....:)

Krishanu said...

I'm honored..

If I can I will...

Saptarshi Bhattacharya said...

this one seemed to me the best one so far... because I understood it!!!( I am a very honest guy!!)

Such thoughts are real assets and soon you will learn to connect them even better.

Keep it up!!

SUTIRTHA said...

awsum mate.........i neither have the power of imgination nor the capability to write such elegant masterpieces.it is an honour to read such poems and get an opportunity to post a commnt......liked the poem very much...keep penning down ur thoughts for us :) :) :)

Krishanu said...

It is pure ecstasy which drove me to write this one...

thanks everyone....

Deb_SG said...

hey the greek god!!
r u animated?it seems u are talking with me...

Meghdoot Mukherjee said...

emotions expressed wonderfully well

Durga Nandan said...

Eros.. :)
The end gave the charm. :)